dagosan's haiku diary: November 2005

Wednesday, November 30, 2005

last garbage day
in November --
the squirrels feast all morning

second draft:

unseasonably warm
a puppy laps up
our snow buddha

grayscale morning --
the stained glass window
has the blues

2nd draft (nov. 28, 2005, 10 PM):

half-shoveled driveway --
we warm our hands
over the turkey soup

original version:

half-shoveled driveway --
steaming turkey soup
warms our hands

winter twins--
which tree blossomed
last Spring?

frozen river--
snow hides
the elm's reflection