Tuesday, August 29, 2006

II: 178

cool August night --
sorry i shooed
summer away




last date --
she clears her throat
and orders chocolate mousse

Sept. 3, 2006, re-do [redux]:

last date --
the bittersweet taste
of chocolate mousse

2 Comments:

At September 03, 2006 4:34 AM, Blogger Hippy Cow said...

I LOVE the last date haiku!Very true...sadly.

 
At September 03, 2006 12:09 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Thanks, H.C.! Even desserts are sometimes bittersweet.

It's nice of you to stop by and opine. Best wishes with your new weblog.

 

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