Sunday, June 11, 2006

II: 156

on our pond --
the geese you chased
from your pond

7 Comments:

At June 12, 2006 1:01 PM, Blogger Aurora said...

These are all good, but the first one is really funny.

 
At June 12, 2006 10:31 PM, Blogger Shane said...

heh heh. all good, especially geese

 
At June 13, 2006 9:10 AM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Thank you, Aurora and Shane. Watch out for those externalities.

 
At June 13, 2006 10:58 AM, Blogger texas haijin said...

i love the first one.

 
At June 13, 2006 6:03 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Thanks, Dustin.

I've decided to recall the last two poems, for further work or mothballing. I like the geese one the best, too.

 
At June 15, 2006 1:42 PM, Blogger texas haijin said...

i need new giacalone haiku! :)

 
At June 15, 2006 6:48 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Dustin, It's nice to be missed. I'm afraid that I've been correct all along in concluding that, without a deadline, I get nothing written. Also, my energy and attention span just haven't been sufficient to concentrate long enough to conjure up an idea and turn it into a haiku.

Let's hope my Haiku Muse kicks me in the butt some time soon.

 

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