dagosan's haiku diary: II: 156

Sunday, June 11, 2006

on our pond --
the geese you chased
from your pond

At June 12, 2006 1:01 PM, Anonymous said...: These are all good, but the first one is really funny.
At June 12, 2006 10:31 PM, Unique Designs from Zazzle said...: heh heh. all good, especially geese
At June 13, 2006 9:10 AM, david giacalone said...: Thank you, Aurora and Shane. Watch out for those externalities.
At June 13, 2006 6:03 PM, david giacalone said...: Thanks, Dustin.

I've decided to recall the last two poems, for further work or mothballing. I like the geese one the best, too.
At June 15, 2006 6:48 PM, david giacalone said...: Dustin, It's nice to be missed. I'm afraid that I've been correct all along in concluding that, without a deadline, I get nothing written. Also, my energy and attention span just haven't been sufficient to concentrate long enough to conjure up an idea and turn it into a haiku.

Let's hope my Haiku Muse kicks me in the butt some time soon.