Monday, May 29, 2006

II: 149

a warm tongue
on my thigh --
her dog's sad eyes

4 Comments:

At May 30, 2006 10:16 AM, Blogger texas haijin said...

morning dew
licked from my toe-
a stray dog?

 
At May 30, 2006 2:27 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,
if your name wasn't ascribed to this piece, i'd swear it had been
written by charlie chaplin.

the pathos makes this piece.
ed


tunnel of love
she props the stuffed frog
between us

 
At May 30, 2006 2:36 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

hi, ed and dust,

thanks for stopping by and leaving some fine verse. i was looking more for bathos, ed.

 
At October 09, 2017 3:10 AM, Anonymous voyance amour gratuite said...

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