Saturday, March 25, 2006

II: 084

the floe
flies away -
eyes water

2 Comments:

At March 25, 2006 7:04 PM, Blogger Aurora said...

I'm a great fan of alliteration.:)

 
At March 26, 2006 6:49 AM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Hi, Aurora.

Here, the event and the words came first (what else do you call an ice floe, or wings flapping and a bird flying away?). Being haiku, I'm sure that many editors would reject the alliteration as forced or excessive. Sometime allit happens.

 

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