Monday, March 20, 2006

II: 079

spring's first sunset -
blown away by color
and wind

5 Comments:

At March 20, 2006 6:55 PM, Anonymous levon machenry said...

bingo again another right on the money...



prairie wind
a rooster tail of dust rises
from the cowboy's wrangler

 
At March 20, 2006 8:17 PM, Anonymous jaswant singh baggha said...

writing from north india. very
nice to see this very nice poem.
it gladdens my heart. more of
this would perhaps help create
a more peaceful planet.

jsb

early spring
a himalayan peak
punctures the clouds

 
At March 21, 2006 7:27 AM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Thanks to both of you for your comment and poem.

I hope I didn't mess up my haiku with the slight edit.

 
At March 21, 2006 12:42 PM, Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like the "picture" this gives..

 
At March 22, 2006 1:01 PM, Blogger its_baxter said...

^ i agree. its nice

 

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