dagosan's haiku diary: V: 048

Thursday, October 29, 2009

half-moon Halloween -
a young face painted
with yin and yang

At October 31, 2009 6:59 PM, bandit said...: Love this one...
At November 01, 2009 9:56 PM, Anonymous said...: To David Giacalone:

Mr G

I hope this finds you in good health and spirits.
I understand that you are the Godfather of the notion that Spence's Blog(Famed Attoreny, Gerry Spence) etc are like some cult, and now others have picked up on that, as Norm Pattis wrote over 30 blog pieces on Spence the cultist.
It seems your contribution to this notion was omitted.
If you care to look at do a google on Norm Pattis, TLC, Spence and all kinds of varations on that.
Most curious, you are doing Childrens poetry, and Spence has his Trial Lawyers College.(TLC), diplomas and all...
If you care to contact Norm Pattis he is a lawyer in Conn, who is a master blogger, at Norm Pattis BLOG.

Yours Truly, Gordon Williams
Los Angles, Ca.

Let me try my hand for a bit of verse:

Mirror Mirror on the wall,
who is the badest barrister of them all

Mirror mirror on the wall,
who wins each and all

Mirror Mirror on the wall,
who pays the toll for the fall

Mirror mirror on the wall,
did the trade Commission end it all.

(maybe not in the foremat for the strict verse, but my lame attempt, nevertheless)
At November 03, 2009 9:21 PM, david giacalone said...: To: Gordon Williams

1) Do you have a point?

2) Please consider learning more about the haiku genre before dismissing it as children's. For example, see
http://tinyurl.com/HaikuPrimer