III: 053
first date:
she moans with pleasure
at my pun
"surely our last
game of Scrabble" --
first date
first date
she insists on taking
the photo
[haiga: photo: Arthur Giacalone; see MagnaPoetsJF]
first date --
her eyes linger
on the rusted fender
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Hi David,
I had really good time reading through your haiku diary. Thanks for posting it. Unfortunately, I haven't written much in english yet so not much to give you back from my side. Best regards.
http://ricardo-haiku.blogspot.com/
Hello, Ricardas. Thanks for stopping by and leaving such kinds words. Good luck with your growing inventory of haiku.
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