Sunday, December 03, 2006

II: 204

tree lighting --
clouds obscure an
almost-full moon

2 Comments:

At December 03, 2006 4:21 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

a revision of "cheerios." we were
also served powdered eggs.


powdered eggs
the shadows of short bars
cast on the long


i never really saw the sun. keep
in mind this was a small town
lock up. there was a barred window above my bed.

your haiku is nice. i looked at pictures from the haiku gathering
in north carolina. the people all
look nice.

ed

 
At December 03, 2006 9:18 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Hi, Ed, I don't have any incarceration experiences to put into ku. I did once visit a woman in jail who was waiting trial for killing four or five of her children. Maybe that's worth a senryu some day.

When did "nice" become such an integral part of your vocabulary?

 

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