Sunday, January 08, 2006

II: 008

yellow halo --
the dog completes
my snow angel


At January 09, 2006 10:10 AM, Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

David - dogs can be the poet's most consistent muse... :^)

last day of the year —
a dog pees
on what’s left of a snowman

At January 09, 2006 10:43 AM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Yes indeed, Paul. I was admiring you poem when last at your site, and wondering how much less was left of the snowman after the dog's contribution.

What I actually hoped to do last night was to write a one-breath poem that captured the same lazy down flopped in front of the fireplace one moment and joyfully romping in the snow the next.

At January 09, 2006 2:06 PM, Blogger Eric said...

for a moment the old dog
forgets he's old . . .
christmas snow

At January 09, 2006 4:19 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

Nice, Eric. You haijin are such show-offs. (thanks goodness)


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