Yes indeed, Paul. I was admiring you poem when last at your site, and wondering how much less was left of the snowman after the dog's contribution.
What I actually hoped to do last night was to write a one-breath poem that captured the same lazy down flopped in front of the fireplace one moment and joyfully romping in the snow the next.
. haiku advocate trying to keep a Beginner's Mind ... former lawyer-mediator...... editor of f/k/a weblog ... Born 1949, but a few body parts occasionally feel much younger.. . . a/k/a dagosan
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David - dogs can be the poet's most consistent muse... :^)
last day of the year —
a dog pees
on what’s left of a snowman
Yes indeed, Paul. I was admiring you poem when last at your site, and wondering how much less was left of the snowman after the dog's contribution.
What I actually hoped to do last night was to write a one-breath poem that captured the same lazy down flopped in front of the fireplace one moment and joyfully romping in the snow the next.
for a moment the old dog
forgets he's old . . .
christmas snow
Nice, Eric. You haijin are such show-offs. (thanks goodness)
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