Wednesday, December 21, 2005

I: 025

snow-covered river
not one human
in sight





snow-covered river
cattails
nodding





solstice sun
behind gray clouds
snow-covered river

4 Comments:

At December 21, 2005 3:34 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

my offering.

ed


winter river
the stepping stones linked
by thin ice

 
At December 21, 2005 4:26 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david, maybe better this way...



winter river
thin ice
l
i
n
k
s
the stepping stones


ed

 
At December 21, 2005 6:32 PM, Blogger david giacalone said...

I like both, Edward. My edit:

winter river
thin ice
__between___stepping__stones__

 
At December 21, 2005 7:03 PM, Anonymous ed markowski said...

david,

your edit is very good. my

thinking seems to be too

traditional these days.

ed


here's the same river, different

season...


playing him,
the old trout leads me into
a thicket of thorns

 

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